2014년 9월 24일 수요일

The introduction

The introduction
Everyday's chatter are came form the internet news or issues. People use the internet naturally without considering about 'censorship on the internet.' However, after the '세월호 사건' happened, people began to consider about lots of things about Korea government and 'censorship on the media' is one of them. Especially we have to think about whether 'censorship on the internet is necessary or not.'

1. Attention grabber
I attracted the audience by describing a situation everyone is already familiar with, Korea government's censorship on the media as '세월호 사건.' Then I pointed out something that most of them can't recognize - There is government's censorship around them even on the internet.

2. Explains the topic


In the attention grabber I introduce all the elements of my topic : Censorship, and I explain why you have to consider 'censorship on the internet.'

3. My thesis
My topic is that 'Censorship is not necessary on the internet.' I think it's clear to describe reasons for this topic.

댓글 2개:

  1. Good job so far~ But could you maybe find an English term for the Korean word you used?

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  2. '세월호 사건' is a recent Korean issue. 세월호 is a name of a ship and 사건 means issue. In specipic, it means the recent issue that one big ship was sinked in ocean and it occured more than 200 losses of students.

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