The introduction

The introduction
Everyday's chatter are came form the internet news or issues. People use the internet naturally without considering about 'censorship on the internet.' However, after the '세월호 사건' happened, people began to consider about lots of things about Korea government and 'censorship on the media' is one of them. Especially we have to think about whether 'censorship on the internet is necessary or not.'

1. Attention grabber

I attracted the audience by describing a situation everyone is already familiar with, Korea government's censorship on the media as '세월호 사건.' Then I pointed out something that most of them can't recognize - There is government's censorship around them even on the internet.

2. Explains the topic

In the attention grabber I introduce all the elements of my topic : Censorship, and I explain why you have to consider 'censorship on the internet.'

3. My thesis

My topic is that 'Censorship is not necessary on the internet.' I think it's clear to describe reasons for this topic.

Classical argument outline

1. The introduction
I will start by describing the situation everyone is already familiar with :
Government's censorship on the media is becoming more and more tight. Even the censorship is enfored on the internet. Like Korea's '세월호 사건', there are lots of countries enforcing internet censorship.
As asking 'what do you think about these status of internet censorship?' and I will end with my thesis, "Internet censorship is not necessary."

2. The narration
I will summarize the research I've done and provide a definition of internet censorship and specific examples of countries which enforcing internet censorship especially China. In addition, I will explain the effects of enforcing internet censorship.

3. The confirmation
I will start by mentioning the problem of internet censorship as it disturbs internet freedom and I will provide my researches about internet freedom. Then, I will mention the right to know with my researches that shows the examples that disturb netizens' right to know. Finally, I will mention that deciding whether the internet information is harmful or not is up to netizens' own judge, not up to government.

4. The refutation and concession
I will concede that there are lots of harmful information and internet censorship is for protecting those. However, as I mentioned above(number3), I will refut as deciding those is just up to netizens and making ideal internet society is netizens' duty as providing my research about an example, netizens' duty.

5. The summation
I will close with a summary of my previous points and make an aftereffect that makes readers think about whether internet censorship is necessary or not. In the end, I will mention my thesis again.

Research 6

Source:
Deciding information's reliability
http://www.cdc.gov/des/consumers/research/understanding_deciding.html
Netizens' duty
http://technology.inquirer.net/34333/netizens-to-fortun-you-did-the-right-thing

What I hope to learn from this source:
What is netizens' duty and what should netizens do to make ideal internet society?

Notes:
1. How netizens decide whether informations reliable or not
2. What is netizens' duty

Final Toughts:
I realized that there is some categories that netizens have to do as their duty. Also I thought that netizens are very important to make ideal internet society.

Research 5

Source:
Right to know
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Right_to_Internet_access
http://www.theguardian.com/law/2012/jan/11/is-internet-access-a-human-right

What I hope to learn from this source:
Does internet censorship disturbs the right to know?

Notes:
1. What is the right to know? - the law
2. Is internet access a human right?

Final Toughts:
Internet censorship not only disturbs internet freedom but also the right to know like the China's censorship on the goggle.

Research 4

Source:
Internet freedom
http://www.internetdeclaration.org/
http://rights.jinbo.net/english/expression.html

What I hope to learn from this source:
Does internet censorship disturbs internet freedom?

Notes:
1. Internet censorship disturbs the freedom of expression
2. There is an internet declaration that against thight censorship on the internet

Final Toughts:
Netizens have to concentrate on the internetdeclaration to regain the freedom of expression on the internet.

Research 3

Source:
Internet censorship effects
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Streisand_effect
http://smallbusiness.chron.com/disadvantages-internet-censorship-28293.html

What I hope to learn from this source:
Status after internet censorship is enforced.

Notes:
1. The purpose of internet censorship is disturbed
2. Internet censorship occur massive problem that disturb the right to know and express

Final Thoughts:
Netizens have to struggle to be ensured the rights against internet censorship. Also people have to think about the basic purpose of internet censorship.

Research 2

Source:
China's internet censorship
http://chineseculture.about.com/od/mediainchina/a/Internet-Censorship-in-China.htm
http://chineseculture.about.com/od/businesseconomy/a/China-Internet-Sector-What-You-Need-To-Know.htm
http://www.hrichina.org/en/content/3244

What I hope to learn from this source:
The specific status of internet censorship in China

Notes:
1. Google against China's internet censorship
2. China banned SNS as facebook, twitter etc
3. China made their own internet service against google
4. Firewall on the internet

Final Toughts:
Internet censorship in China is very oppressive and China should control their oppressive internet censorship for Chinese netizens.

Articulation

1. My argument
: Censorship is not necessary on the internet
I want to know diffrent countries' status of censorship on internet and decide whether censorship on the internet is right or no based on the status. In addition, lately in Korea, the big issue is censorship on the media should be allowed, so I'd like to research on this issue especially censorship on the internet.

2. How I found my argument
My first research question was, how different countries enforce the censorship on the internet? It was obvious that today's Korea government censors some informations on the internet and also censors the media as TV and radio and so on. In addition, Korean censorship even tighter after an incident called '세월호사건'. So, I just wanted to know other counties' status of censoring the media, especially internet censorship. As I continued researching, I found that there is very tight internet censorship in China. I shocked after knowing that even Chinese can be killed just becaused of emailing sensative informations to others. Then, I thought that 'internet censorship is not necessary' and also I expected that it will be interesting and it will lead other's focus. Therefore, I choosed this argument, 'internet censorship is not necessary.'

3. New research questions
I have several questions that need to be resolved.
1) Countries especially China have to continue the internet censorship?
2) What is the effects of enforcing internet censorship?
3) Does internet censorship block the internet freedom?
4) Does internet censorship disturb the right to know?
5) What is the netizens' duty to make ideal internet siciety?
I'll continue searching the internet and looking for interesting articles and keeping track of my research with blog posts.

4. Connections to the Harvard Sampler
This argument can be connected to 'chapter 5.The Internet : Liberty in Cyberspace.' It's because the internet censorship is related to netizens' liberty in cyberspace and this topic is about a happening on the internet.

Research1

Source:
Internet censorship
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Internet_censorship 

My Topic: 
Censorship is not necessary on the internet.

What I hope to learn from this source:
I want to know the definition of the internet censorship and each countires' status of the internet censorship including the North Korea.

Notes:
1. Definition of internet censorship : Internet censorship is the control or suppression of what can be accessed,published, or viewed on the Internet. It may be carried out by governments or by private organizations at the behest of government, regulator, or on their own initiative.

2. Goal of internet censorship : some countries enforce an internet censorship to block some information that threat public safety or system.

 
Final Thoughts:
Based on this souce, I made own definition of censorship and I could know more information about censorship and specific examples of each countries' status of cencorship.