Self Evaluation

1. What score do you think you deserve?

I think 1 point is appropriate for my first draft. It is because I did use proper and various materials to support my opinion, but I must check some grammar mistakes and so on.

2. What did you do well?

I think as my topic is persuasive and proper, so I could make my creative first draft. I use lots of materials as credible and various research from experts.

3. What could you have done better?
I think I chould have checked gramma
r better. It's because I had poor score on grammar and teacher also said I have to check my essay again.

4. Which part of the argument did you use the best?

I think I did refutation very well. It's because i found lots of research to make my refutation strong.

5. Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I think I make up my introduction. I could explain the Korean recent issues.


6. What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

My strategy for second draft is 'to make up my introduction'. Also, as I have continued my research, if the time permits, I will add some additional explanation about my essay's background information.